tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5277823968226470344.post7112809265562005132..comments2023-05-24T19:02:29.705+05:30Comments on Straight Lines: Love's PriceMarlin Jarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13855324374575320370noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5277823968226470344.post-64078258933273064572008-02-12T20:33:00.000+05:302008-02-12T20:33:00.000+05:30I applaud the effort, and more so, because it does...I applaud the effort, and more so, because it doesn't seem like you have put the effort, and that is the mark of genius.<BR/>But, I must point out the slight awkwardness I felt at the illusion of the rhyme. <BR/>Nevertheless, the poem is precise and the usage of "eye rhymes" is beautiful, and it compensates for the awkwardness, but only slightly.unni krishnanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10269571117566782461noreply@blogger.com